I’m not sure which way I should write my story, so I would love your input. Deadline: November 9, 2009
I have two options (I’m not using actual names because I think that would ruin the story so I’ll just use Cat A, Cat B, APOV, BPOV, etc.)
Option 1
November 1
Cat A was so kind to get me this journal for my birthday! Cat A also got me a book on small magic, using a spell I found in the book I managed to cast a spell on a pen so I can write. Cat B got me a book about grooming and a new pink ribbon I can use as a collor. Cat C, Cat D, and Cat E threw me a surprise party and got me various trinkets. I almost forgot! Cat F was there and he got me into his club, I know that he will be a promient member of society and be a member of lots of clubs. I’m so lucky to have the friends that I do! Especially with my best friend! My best friends are Cat A and Cat B. The three of us are really tight! I’m amazed at how close Cat A and Cat B are, brothers aren’t normally that close!
Time to go back to the party!
Ta for now!
Cat G
Option 2
APOV
“OH MY GOD! Thanks you guys!” I shout at my two best friends. I run over to the white tom, his fur has stripes of varying shades of brown, I nuzzle him. I prance over to the red tom next to him and nuzzle him as well. They got my friends together and threw me a surprise brithday party in the Meadow. They both gave me a book; the white tom gave me one about small magic, the red tom gave me one on grooming techniques. I smile at how well my best friends know me before opening the rest of my presents.
BPOV
I hear one of my best friends scream her thanks before rushing over and nuzzling me. I watch as the small, black almost queen prances to my brother, a red tom, and nuzzles him too. My brother and I threw her a surprise party and invited all our friends. I know how curious she is aout her magic, which she has a tiny bit of, and how intelligent she is so I got her a book about small magic. My brother got her a book on grooming, personally I think it insults her mind, but she must like it because I remember that she smiles after nuzzling my brother. I wish I could read her mind and know who she likes beter, but she’s the one with magic. Try as I might, the smile haunts me for the rest of the day.
CPOV
My best friend–a petite, black almost queen–the prettist cat out of the ones I know and see, comes running at my brother, a white tom with unremarkable brown stripes. She nuzzles my brother in thanks for a book he got her for her birthday. She prances to me and nuzzles me, I notice a smile on her face before she leaves to open the rest of her presents. She went to my brother first but she smiled at me, and she opened his first but is was at the top of the pile so maybe she just wanted to thank him first. I wish I knew who she likes more, she’s glamorous but there’s more to herthan that. I watch her closely and wonder. The nezzle she gave my brother and the smile she gave me haunt me for the rest of the day.
